Beautifully written with a rare topic and what if scenario. You have a fantastic sense of setting without letting it interfere with the story line. And you did it all in only 1800 words! Great!
I love both these stories. In fact, I had to go and watch an ep after reading them, and now I'm hooked on the show. You're so evil.
Lady Lane 10/10/01 . chapter 1
That was sooo great. Alias is one of my new favorite show, and I have been waiting for somebody to write a story. And I loved Danny. But Agent V. is pretty cute too!