Lovely, thanks for sharing with us. I enjoyed this plunge into Cloud's psyche - and Zack's, I suppose, in a way. Beautiful and thought-provoking.

Mthaytr

Awesome, I didn't even know who was who until I was half way through it! Good job! XD

Interesting, the stream-of-consciousness style really suits this story. :) It's a little confusing in parts - I think mostly because it could do with proofreading - but I love the imagery of the broken halves and Cloud having two sets of memories.