and here i thought that Fate finally had the upper hand in one of your fics but NO. xD Nanoha has entered domination mode. I must say that i feel occasionally sorry for Fate in your humour fics but i have to say they are hilarious. like this one.

this is definitely worth my time!

a great great story haha\m
more nanofate story pls!

Hoky freaking shit. This fic's got it all! "Nyahahah", "M" Nanoha, slightly perverted Fate... it's awesome!

O.o beware of nanoha O_O its funny :P keep up the good work

Poor poor Nanoha at the start and poor poor Fate at the end.

Very good.
Good luck with the writing

Reader458

Do you know Kwon BoA? She just released her US Debut Album and she had a song titled 'dress off' where the lyrics went"So all you wanna do is take my dress off (Dress off
And like a candy store I know you want it all (It all
Oh I can read you baby and I know that you want me

With my dress off my dress off (d-d-d-d-dress
With my dress off off off off off off off off

With my dress off off off off off off off off
... I request.. D A Dress Off NanoFate D XDD

That was really good there. I like the part where Fate and Nanoha rode on the motorbike.

Aw poor fate! im almost scared for her!

great job though!

once again, another fabulous nanofate story! keep impressing me w/ your writing!

Ja!

fate-chan leather bikersuit motorcycle hot, bad-ass fate!

i think i just died and went to heaven! nanoha is one lucky girl! i soo love you fic! instant fave! _ write MORE!

Hm... the taste of sweet fluff! Thanks for your contribution to the section! I love your story as well! it's really cute!

Nanofate motorbike WIN

I loved this one. Fluffy and funny :3 And I like a lot seeing Nanoha so shy at first and so agressive at the end xD

WE-ELL. You're quite aware i'm not really all into nanofate, but haha i think the plot's damn funny! As in, cool idea you have there, of "WHAT-A-MOTORBIKE-CAN-DO-TO-THE-TWO-PEOPLE-NAMED-NANOHA-AND-FATE"! Nanoha's super cute and funny in the first half of the story, where she's all whiny and freaking out at the prospect of riding the MONSTER MOTORBIKE. And Fate's well, Fate (in your own dreamy mind haha).
Quote“N-Na-Nanoha!” Fate squeaked suddenly, nearly losing control of the motorcycle. “Watch where you put your hands!” OH GOSH HAHAHAHAHA that's damn funny! WHERE DID SHE PUT HER HANDS, I WONDER. HMM.

Definitely a nice way to end your story, with that part where Nanoha tells herself that she WILL NOT LOSE to a mere motorbike. And i guess it's nice and fluffy throughout (for nanofate fans, especially)!
Cool writing! (although i think with all the touching here and there, you could always consider changing the rating to a T WHAHAHAHAHHAHA)

That was AMAZING (is it a one-shot?) Anyways thanks for the AWESOME read if it's only a oneshot, if there are more chapters can't wait to read them XD!

Uwaa that was just hilarious, the helmet line really made me laugh maybe I can use that in real life someday lol