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Reviews For: Those Who Trespass Against Us

Kazaam
2008-07-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh gosh, this was so heart-breaking! The thought of killing Angeal must've tormented Zack so much... And it's so awful that Zack feels like he let Seph down, and that the world is such a horrible place.

I loved the hug at the end, though! ^^ It's great that Seph's there for Zack, especially since he really needs it right now.
Amarissia
2008-06-09
ch 1,
abuseAh, this was what CC was missing. Lovely.
Chibi Cheesecake
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseSo ridiculously saad! ;_; Oh, this honestly made me tear up a little. All the stuff about the SOLDIERs...and the bit where Zack confesses is just *heartbreaking*. It's not often that we see the gloomy side of him, and it's so sad but makes for such amazing fic!
Staci-Diane603
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseThis is stunning. The subject is very sensitive and you handled it masterfully, and the story itself is just beautifully executed. Phenomenal job! I really love this. :]
Dark Seraphim
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseOh wow! This is precious! I liked a lot! I wish I could say more, but nothing but what I just typed comes out! Well done!
Crystal Rose of Pollux
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseOh, poor Zack. I'm sure he knew that he would be fighting, but not against one of his friends. I love how you mentioned that he's still pretty young, but trying to act more grown-up; that was especially poignant.
And, oh, friendship cuteness! Yay for Seph not letting Zack go through this alone!
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