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| Kazaam 2008-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh gosh, this was so heart-breaking! The thought of killing Angeal must've tormented Zack so much... And it's so awful that Zack feels like he let Seph down, and that the world is such a horrible place. I loved the hug at the end, though! ^^ It's great that Seph's there for Zack, especially since he really needs it right now. |
| Amarissia 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseAh, this was what CC was missing. Lovely. |
| Chibi Cheesecake 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseSo ridiculously saad! ;_; Oh, this honestly made me tear up a little. All the stuff about the SOLDIERs...and the bit where Zack confesses is just *heartbreaking*. It's not often that we see the gloomy side of him, and it's so sad but makes for such amazing fic! |
| Staci-Diane603 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is stunning. The subject is very sensitive and you handled it masterfully, and the story itself is just beautifully executed. Phenomenal job! I really love this. :] |
| Dark Seraphim 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! This is precious! I liked a lot! I wish I could say more, but nothing but what I just typed comes out! Well done! |
| Crystal Rose of Pollux 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseOh, poor Zack. I'm sure he knew that he would be fighting, but not against one of his friends. I love how you mentioned that he's still pretty young, but trying to act more grown-up; that was especially poignant. And, oh, friendship cuteness! Yay for Seph not letting Zack go through this alone! |