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Tori-chan
2009-10-07 . chapter 10
Aww... X3
I look forward to more!
MinervaEvenstar
2009-09-30 . chapter 10
I have lots of things to be excited about:

You updated! It was very good with showing Grindelwald/Dumbledore, and funny with Remus trying to get all of the Other Siriuses to work.

Sirius forgave Remus for kissing Other Sirius..after shagging him senseless. ;) I really liked that since you usually write Sirius as being the submissive one in bed.

I was right about the inter-world romance between Other Remus and Other Sirius! ^_^ CHeers to Sirius for being the one to suggest it!

Of course, I still have some concerns:

Can Grindelwald summon Remus now that he's in another world?

Is something wrong with James since he isn't answering Sirius' patronuses?

I won't find out until you update again, so please do so soon!
Lady Annikaa
2009-09-24 . chapter 10
Loved this chapter! Have I mentioned before how brilliant I think Remus animagus form is fox is? Great job!!
RevengeoftheForsaken
2009-09-24 . chapter 10
This is so well-written I forgot it was a fanfiction and not a book I was reading.

Please continue! :D
Ikarinogo
2009-09-24 . chapter 10
=3 kya... \o/
TreeTart
2009-09-23 . chapter 10
this is such a great story! i love your ideas.
i definitely picture remus as a fox =D
sierra's scarlet
2009-09-23 . chapter 10
Sorry it took me a bit. Was moving into my dorm. Anyways, great chapter. I love the animagus flash back at the beginning.

And Sirius was being quite Sirius-like “Just remember, that your Sirius is the one with his hand on your arse.”

Also, one Sirius and Remus from different worlds just got their happy ending!

Great job.
ellesra
2009-09-23 . chapter 10
You're as brilliant as always :) Please update sooner this time ;p Cheers :3
Bryddyd
2009-09-23 . chapter 10
At last! as always, loved your writting... Please update soon.
1Ivanessence1
2009-09-22 . chapter 10
..DUDE! UR ALIVE!

XD

I REALLY lovd this chapter, and I will quite literally get on my knees and beg you to update soon...

Trust me, I've done it before to other people... >.< lol
ZairaAlbereo
2009-09-22 . chapter 10
Cute, funny, sexy... I'm really pulling for the Remus of this world and lonesome puppy Sirius. Right now I'm almost more interested in them, but that could be because Sirius and Remus (well the original ones, you know what I mean... ;) have happily reunited and I somehow don't care too much in which world they live as long as they are together. :) No, no I know there was something important about it, I might have to read again to remember though, lol...

Anyway, what I liked maybe the most was the scene where remus confessed to having kissed the other Sirius. I liked how you let Sirius react, a little hurt probably, but concentratingg on the important stuff - that they are back together and not making a huge thing out of it.

More soon? Lets hope! :)
renagirl9
2009-06-26 . chapter 9
This is a really good story! Will you update it again? PLEASE!
zemblanity
2009-05-25 . chapter 9
I really hate being the type of person that reviews just to say update, but... Please update! This fanfic is so good and I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm thinking that the foxxy Remus likes the werewolf Sirius and I can't wait to see what you do with that.
Moonsign
2009-05-24 . chapter 9
I'm still readiing!! I adore this story. The idea of lots of Siriuses and Remuses around is just so fun. I can't wait to see irritaable Remus's reaction to yet ANOTHER Sirius invading his house. :P
Herb3
2009-05-15 . chapter 9
intersting chapter^^
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