You have an error in your time. If Link was 7 when he started the quest then he would be 14 not 17. He was sealed in the temple of time for seven years, not ten.

Oh, beautiful ending. I'm off to read the other two parts. _ I have longed to find the writer who would understand my points of view on Zelda and Link, and the unrequited love between them...what beautiful descriptions )

Aw... it ends on such a sad and enigmatic note! It was so beautiful. The structure you have built up is amazing. I will have to get round to reading the other stories that go after this. Great job.
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I thank you for reviewing my story.

Oh... this was beautiful. I must check out your other works. Your writing is magnificent! The entire flowed so well... I was quite caught up in it...

This is truly a work of art. Selah!

This was so beautiful, and so sad! Better than anything I could have written. Oh, I loved it so much!

That was beautiful! I love it! I'm going to read Parts Two and Three now! Like I said, a beautiful story!

Excellent fanfic, Laura. Needless to say, Phantwo was quite. Your Zelda fanfiction is clearly THE best within the site.

I read all three of these on your site. I love these fics. I'm reviewing this one here because I have to add you to my favourite authors list... eheheh. This series is very well-writte seriously, these fics read like novels, they're so well-written. You're a rare gem to . Don't forget your writing to college! You have too much talent to let it go to waste!

Laura, I really enjoyed this piece. It's rare to see a well written first person story and it was a joy to see one. I'm off to read the others. -

You know, I remember reading this one before the LOZFFml went up, and liking it then. Adult love is not all huggly squealy crap, it's often confusing and fraught with considerations other than romance. Thank you for pointing this up! _ Well done.

I hope you don't mind if I review here instead. Yahoo's doing weird things to my computer. :p Anyway, wow, great story. I should've read this sooner. _ I like the beginning, where you have the long sentances followed by the short ones. Gives is an interesting feel to it. Ok, I'm off to read the others. )

Hmmm... Not bad, it's okay. But, heck, it sounded like Zelda, so I'm giving you extra credit. So, change what I said before into
GOOD FIC!

This was so good Laura! I really loved it. Short and sweet. :0)

A wonderful vignette. It was quite the brave feat to try and appeal to both L/Z and L/M shippers, and you accomplished that and then some. Congratulations on your first fanfiction and I wish you many more in the future.

You make it sound at the end like Link does love Zelda, you should write a counterpoint to this story from Link's View