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Shane likes POKEMON 2008-10-01 ch 10,	abusenice job i still think you shouldnt have changed the plot
Shane likes POKEMON 2008-10-01 ch 7,	abuseyou should not mess with thev original plot kakashi has to be the sensai it makes the story complete and better
Allyon Everstone 2008-09-30 ch 10,	abuseLove the ending here very cool
dhh 2008-09-30 ch 10,	abuseKinda to short to even be a chapter.. Hope it'll be longer next time!! Sincerely,
Jehovah's Witness 2008-09-28 ch 10,	abuseI love your plot, but your grammar sucks big time, no offense. I'm also a betareader, so if you need someone to betaread your fics, just know that I'm open for business. Also, try to expand the scenes a little more.
ares88 2008-09-28 ch 10,	abuseI have to be honest with you. Im sorry but your grammar sucks a LOT. Im sorry and dont please hate me but Im just telling you this. Try at least read the chapter before update. Im sorry again. Your plot is great. I mean it has a lot potential and it can kick ** but again your grammar ruins everything. I have to concintrate to get anything from this and mentally revise it. I think you should end Sakura bashin some time soon. Your story and all but i dont like that Sakura is the only person who is left alone. Now when she is in Kurenais team, she should reseave a lot genjutsu tutoring which fits her. Well, your story and everything. But try not to be hasty while writing. Anyway, plot is interesting so i will wait for the update. Thank you.
ninja-freak13 2008-09-28 ch 10,	abuseoh, my, god. i love this! this is the bestest thing in the world! the only thing i'd change is i'd get a beta, cause the grammer is a little confuseing. confusing. erm...i live for spell check...sweat drop so...i'm gonna try to do some fanart for this fic!! i love this fic! this is the most amazing plot ever! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Hagensen 2008-09-28 ch 10,	abuseI'm guessing she's going to run Naruto in to the ground. I do share her same thoughts on Sakura and kurenai. Keep up the good work, Rock out!
totalnarutofangirl85 2008-09-28 ch 10,	abuseI have a feeling you don't like Sakura that much... Anyway, nice chapter I like Anko! Please update soon!
ninja-freak13 2008-09-27 ch 1,	abusei love it! but wasn't Minato the naruto-like one? ah, well! i love it, i love it, i love it!
dhh 2008-09-27 ch 9,	abuseI'm glad for this story but the fact that Naruto won't hit women at all is against being a ninja, don't you think?? It's not wise..You should somehow correct that little fact/detail in his personality/life!! Also, I'm glad that you're going with Temari and not the oh so cliche of a pairing that's Hinata.. Hope you update soon!! Love that Minato is alive.. Sincerely,
Hagensen 2008-09-22 ch 9,	abuseGood story so far, this the first story I've read that Minato and Kushina are alive to raise Naruto plus the paring of Naruto and Temari is a good one. There were a few words miss spelled like the word think you spell as thank but all in all it is a great story and hell I'm not all that great spelling my self. Rock out!
tokyo fox 2008-09-20 ch 9, anon.	abuseGreat story idea and there are a few things I really liked about it...Naruto Sasake frindship... BUT however it was a little too choppy in spots because you jumped a quite a few things that would've made it better. For exsample... Having the part where the third Hokage saved the forth would've been nice. And you skipped so many other details that would've made it more beliveable and solid.. Like did the demon fox still get sealed in Naruto? This and so many other things would've made this fic better.. It's a good idea and it's a nice enough fic but it just missed too many parts that would've made it better.
totalnarutofangirl85 2008-09-20 ch 9,	abuseNice chapter, I liked it. Please update soon!
animefanbren 2008-09-20 ch 9,	abuseKeep on going I just LOVE this story!

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