Beautiful.
Simply beautiful.
Such a deep and thoughtful view on your part.
And even if Dash was OOC, it was the good type.
Not many slash writers touch on the topic of society's approvals and disapprovals.
I applaud you ;].
What really brought me in was Dash's desires.
The bit with the 'rather go to hell with you, than go to heaven without.'
:(. That made tear up.
So angsty.
I basically loved every part of this.
Sigh.
You made my day. :]

:]smiles,
Ume

Wow. That was good and beautiful. I love it. I hope to see some more soon.

That was like a big deep breath. Beautiful, fluid, and touching. brilliant.

-rin

Ok! Did I mention how much I love you? Not love LOVE but for this piece, I do. It's beautiful. I saw it as a separate piece. It's really quite, hotly beautiful. You wanna know my favourite parts? Okay, let's see them and why.

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The sky is grey.

It has always been… it isn’t blue, never will be.

BEST introduction ever. Whenever I have a bad day, the sky's always grey and sometimes, you're wondering will it ever be blue and all you want to do is just yell 'For Blue Skies! Please!'

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To be honest, I don’t really care about anything. I wish we could break away from everything, because I hate to see the way blue eyes fill with tears. I want to protect you and never let go. Instead, I can only hurt you again and again, hoping that you understand: These marks that I put on you are not marks of hate but marks of love; of protection. They mean that you are mine. They mean I love you.

BEST IN 2008! This is so cute. So amazingly cute. I dig it. I mean you're on a role here. I can imagine it and it brought tears to my eyes! It's just fully amazing. I'm so speechless but I'm still typing.

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The bible says this is wrong. To enter heaven, mother says that I have to remove the part of me that sins. Well, that is impossible. How could I remove my entire body, my heart and my soul? Therefore, I can never go to heaven. I would love to join you in hell, if that is where we are headed.

Danny, let's go to hell together, hand in hand. Then we'll be happy together.

Aw, Dash! Nothing's wrong with a guy falling in love with the same sex isn't wrong! You love who you love. You didn't ask God to make you a guy so you can't date guys. How could you? Really, that is so true! And the way you wrote it... nice... angsty... my favourite!

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The sun is eternally lost to me; I chose you. I will never regret my choice, because you act as my sunshine and more… you represent the ever-forgiving love god is depicted to possess.

Even if I had a choice, if I could be without loving you, I would spurn it. You are the only one that matters.

YES! Sunshine is being the one you love and sometimes, love hurts more than hate will ever! You didn't sign up for this love! God made you like this! That's it... that's so true. Okay forgot the best in 2008. This is the best in 2010, baby!

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When you tear you come to me. I mend the injuries, whispering that I love you. Your eyes dazed, you only nod. Perhaps you will never hear, but you mean the most to me. I love you. Aisheteru. Wo Ai Ni. Je ta’ime. Ich liebe dich… I want to say ‘I love you’ every way I can, even in languages I don’t understand, for no matter where I am or what I say, I still love you.

I want to grab your hand and say ‘Stay With Me’, but words fail. You nod, but do you understand what I’m trying to say?

THAT'S MY FAVOURITE PART! So much emotion... tears burning through my cheek as I read this... it's so intense... Dash, you are so deep. And so are you, Moonlight Memories.

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Please, I beg of you…

Be happy while I’m gone… I don’t want to see you too soon…

Danny, you will never hear this, but I really wanted to say that I…

“I love you.”

NO, NO, NO! This is my favourite part! Especially the 'I Love You' that tied it all together. Okay, super long review but hey, you wanna know my real thoughts and I'm still using the tissue box. This was so amazing. +faving this.