cool story! i liked how the guy kept like whinning and being like "why are we here? can we play a game?" ect. ect.

Combine Over-Wiki FTW!

I loved this. You got the personalities exactly right! Although it seems to have used a lot of things that exactly matched what was said in the game, but i loved I spy lol :) good job

Dude, lol.XD You totally got everyone's personalities perfect. Thank you for making my first Half-Life fic ever read so enjoyable. This is so going on my favs.:D

~Gir Crazy ;3

Nice one! By the way, what's this "Combine Over-Wiki" you speak of?

Good enough?

Hell, man, this was awesome! :D

You know, I've been wanting to write a story of our favorite duo, but it looks like you beat me to it!

That was actually really, really entertaining! I love your writing, and the way you described things were both humorous and serious when it needed to be.

That's a pretty nice story for a first-timer. Excelent work, man, excellent work :D

Griggs and Sheckly were a hoot in the game! It's nice to see them get some attention in a fanfic. And I don't think it's OOC at all. I can just HEAR them arguing like this in EP2. :D

Well done!

Don't be so shy! It was good! Griggs, hehe :). He reminds me of one of my close friends. Though she's a female...

Hey, the two also remind me of Mullroy and Murtog from Pirates of the Caribbean! You know, the two guards who argue about the Black Pearl in the first movie?

Smashing job with the description of everything, and you had very few spelling/punctuation mistakes! Keep up the good work!

-STA

Nice work! Very creative and realistic to the Episode itself!