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| xstrawberryfieldsx 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseVery cute, very touching. You're a good writer, and I definitely like this. |
| Maddiecake 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuse... I'm interested to say the least. You had some spelling errors (Jude's last name is spelled "Feeny" for the record) and some places where the words didn't make sense but this was quite interesting. ~ Madeleine |
| Juno227 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good! OMK! POOR JULIA! POOR JUDE! POOR LUCY! |