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| mimic shalle 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseWow, just wow, this was the best, and I mean the best there is for Tou-chan's journey to captaincy. I would mention the quality of your work, but you already know that I'm really amazed with it and oh, I'm totally in love with your it, hook line and sinker. The transition for the events was nothing short from perfect. Yamamoto would surely pulled the strings like that and all the other characters acted accordingly. They were just beautiful. Just simply marvelous, I don't even have anything to point out let alone criticise. Simply marvelous, your work keeps getting better and better. -mimic PS. Um, can I ask you something? How many hits did you have in this story? Surely this should have more credit than this. |