Neat! Gotta love those Yautja that don't act like Yautja! Keep up the good work! PLEASE UPDATE!

This is really good.

This is good update! I wanted know how old is Lauren?

I can't wait for more.

Another great chapter! I look forward to reading more!

intresting story so far am looking forward to reading more

This story sounds good.
Your off to a good start.

Wow, there should definately be more reviews on this. It's well written, and I for one am greatly looking forward to another chapter! Thank you for writing this!

Finally someone writes a story like this! It wasn't really until I'd read this chapter that I realized what the AVP forum was missing: the story of one who refuses to hunt humans and so gets sent to Earth. I love it!! Longer chapters please, but good job on the Yautja language.