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Reviews For: The Great Escape

wrtr74
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abuseGreat job! Funny and sad at the same time, and you captured the characters wonderfully. Thanks for posting this!
mbellsdiva
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseI'm not sure if you intended it, but I found that to be very funny. The vision of Jack in a hospital gown escaping and having a bunch of fat security guards huffing and puffing to catch up to him was very funny. Plus that last little comment from Sydney to Jack about her kicking his ** if he escaped again was cute. I hope Jack heard that in his subconscience and will stay put.
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