A great story. Very good.

WAH? I thought you said that a teenager has to raise a baby fox...there doesn't seem to be a baby fox or a teenager in here anywhere...
Other than that maybe you could explain everything in more vivid detail or if not vivid than more detail.
It just doesn't seem to be that horror to me if its just "the ones who got bit attacked their comrades, pinning them to the floor and then eating them" Its like wheres the blood?, The screaming?, The gore that's supposed to be in horror fics.

Lol

Best Wishes,
KrzyKrn