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writersword
2008-07-09 . chapter 1
this is really good, you really seemed to grasp their characters nicely
i like how you add in little things like Tyler's stutter or
Reid's fascination with climbing trees in 'Branch', they just make sense to me,
like, oh, of course they were like that, it really fits and adds to the character.
nice job!
Enlighten
2008-06-08 . chapter 1
I really liked that. I like how you managed to get in Reid's character, it seemed like exactly what he would do. Nicely done.
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