bittersweet ending!

Keep on writing!

Story was SWEET!

RATING 10!1

I love this story. It's short and sweet. Also, at the end, there is a surprise: the sharingan-user is Kakashi, not Sasuke.

Very nicely written & Keep up the great stories! :)

Aww, poor Genma at the end. Cute story, you do depressed well.
The bit where Genma returns was a bit weird, but generally an okay job :D

LixxyChan xx

how terribly sweet!
especially the epilogue! ♥

Awe, that is so sad!!

But, still a really good epilogue.

Aww, I don't want it to be over! It was so good! This was a great story, beautifully written and all! Luv ya and I hope to see more of you in the future!

--SAYURI--

this is so cute :D i love it

I'm hoping there will be an epilogue!

OH...I really liked this story because, of course GenmaxSakura is one of the best couple pairings ever! I liked your story from beginning to end, it was short and sweet; a fun read; and you deserve SO many more reviews! This was beautiful, and it's heart breaking that it's only 4 chapters! I NEED MORE!

The only problem that I probably had with this was the jump from third to first person, but it wasnt anything that ruined the story! Other than that, PERFECT FIC! I think you portrayed both characters well too!

Again great job, luv! Keep up the AWESOME work!

--SAYURI--

AW that was nice!
YOU FINSHIED! I loved it great job!

OMG you haven't updated in a while so this is really good! Lol. Great chappy. Can't wait for the next one!

Be careful about switching person. You go from first to third and back again several times.

Yay you updated i love this chapter it was nice cant wait to read more!

This was short, it almost felt rushed. Did you just spoil the surprise? hahaha.

Awsome story i cant wait to read more! Update soon!^_^