ABSOULOTEY awesome! I loved this! It was like a real brother-sister moment, the ones that me and MY bro never manage to have. Why couldn't my brother be like Albus. . .

Aww, poor Lily! Al was so sweet, and he did the right thing: comfort his little sis, AND THEN kill the guy who hurt her/broke her heart.

James would've done the opposite.

Zacharias Smith's son? LOL. Go Al and Rose... hex him till kingdom come.

What a lovely little story. Excellent. Very touching. So you become creative when bored! Very normal. LOL.

Aw, poor Lily; my heart just went out to her in this!

OMG, this is one of the sweetest stories EVER! I love how in character it was, and that totally sees like a big brother thing to do. You did a wonderful job showing emotions. Keep up the good work.

Wow, Al is so sweet! I loved it.

Very nice. I like the fact that Al tried to comfort Lily, he's a good big brother. Going into my C2 for sure. :)