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Reviews for: Watching Unseen
SakuraIroKaze
2008-11-28 . chapter 1
i -didnt- notice. -shot-
then I re-read~ and saw the hints. XD
PERFECT PAIR FTW! my favourite (and only) seigaku pair~ XD

~Kura
disfigured-dream
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
Oh.. I see! Quite sad. =/ It's really interesting the way you made Tezuka seem like .. uhh.. he was still there?
Nicely written, although I think the part about 'they were all pretty flowers' is either unneccesary, or should be phrased differently. Because it's sort of an accepted thing that any flowers brought to a funeral would be pretty, not ugly. But you might tweak it so that it becomes 'they were pretty' because 'they were dashed with colour and life'. =)

And gosh! I'm so glad I didn't read this before flying off to China. I would've had nightmares about the plane. o.O
Salsal Dead
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
Right, the story...

I say it's sad :( Was never a big fan of Seigaku, but the story was sad... and good... T.T Me favorites!

~Salsal
crassreine
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
Oh, awesome. I really thought he was just standing there with them, angsting, until the final sentences.
Nasty Evil Dead Dog
2008-06-08 . chapter 1
Awesome! It's too bad that Tezuka died, though.
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