wow. angsty goodness. i especially liked some of the poetic lines eg: 'The stretching glimmer of a younger smile. Cracks on the window. A broken moon...' yah. the repetition of the one, two, three, four, five were used really well to produce a wonderful oneshot. great fict =) .
T_T poor faye

One word: Perfect.

Wow, what an amazing fic! I really felt for Faye in that episode. Freakily enough, you're not the only one who counted those gunshots. I remember being surprised it was five and not six, but I never thought about what actually happened to the last bullet... but I definitely wasn't thinking -that-.

and the connection with Spike's "bang" at the end... god...

...It was terrifyingly beautiful. The kind of subtlety and perfection that's in the show itself.

So yeah, this was beautifully written. I felt like I was reliving the scene when I was reading it, and the continuation really wasn't OoC at all. With everyone leaving--Ed and Ein and then Spike on top of it... I could definitely see her losing it like that, and just... yeah...

God... I wonder what poor Jet is going to do when he finds--...

dear lord..this was excellent. i love it. it's so dark and tramatic...when i watched the last episode i swear i was close to crying and this is the only fic about that episode that's moved me so much. wonderful job!

I really don't see a lot of things wrong in here so good job. But I do have to correct on e thing for you, Spike's last name is not spelled S-p-i-e-g-a-l. It's S-p-i-e-g-E-l. I'm nit picky about his name, sorry.