 Nocturnal Rose 2009-01-05 . chapter 20Love it! Omg Love it! |
 brahms11 2008-10-01 . chapter 12I have to stay that I'm astounded this doesn't have more reviews! The plot is excellent and the pacing is superb- you haven't rushed your characters into anything. Your writing style is very fluid and your characters are believable. Keep up the good work! |
 moony's number 1 2008-08-12 . chapter 20I really enjoyed your story! At first I was confused why there seemed so few reviews for 20 whole chapters, for a well-done and well-put-together story, and then I just kept reading, and couldn't stop!! I had to go to the next page and find out what happened next to Anna and Bruce. One of my fav moments was when she 'saw' him, feeling his features, and then they kissed. With the summary intro-ing a blind woman I knew that had to come at one point, and I wasn't disappointed! Great story, I enjoyed it very much. |
 Vanafindiel 2008-08-05 . chapter 20I liked it. This was very good. |
 AndSoSheDanced 2008-08-03 . chapter 20Excellently written, loved the story line and Anna's character. |
 Luned 2008-08-03 . chapter 20I can't for the life of me work out why you only have 20 reviews?! This has to be one of the best 'Batman' stories I have ever read! Your characterisation of Bruce is perfect. You have also created a believable original character and a plot that had me hooked. I can find no fault!
I would love to read a sequel to this story, you have certainly left it open to one... *hint hint* Please? ;) |
 Speakfire 2008-07-30 . chapter 20This was a very good story, and I really like how you chose to end it. I can't believe you only have 20 reviews for this story, as it's definitely one of the better Bruce/OC stories out there. Thank you for staying with it, you did a good job of keeping it interesting and suspenseful all at once. |
 ScreamsOnScreen 2008-07-21 . chapter 20This was a brilliant story i don't know why i haven't read it before. I suppose the idea of a blind defenceless girl came off as a bit mary sue at first but i'm glad i came back and read it again. I'm not cheering about there not being a sequel i'm booing! I'd love to see what comes of an open relationship. You did really well at describing how Anna 'saw' things and how they were perceived i can imagine it would be hard but you seem to have done it naturally. Its brilliant to see an author doing two of my fave fanfic categories. Doctor who and Batman :D Still waiting on an update for true colour! and write more batman! (long review lol) |
 CrazyGunFire 2008-07-15 . chapter 20Okay, so i just wanted to say that i LOVED this story. Completely loved it and the idea of Anna getting involved being both blind and totally observant is just fantastic. If you do decide to write a sequal then i'll be sure to read it.
Crazy |
 vballmania23 2008-07-13 . chapter 20Great story. |
 Kimmae 2008-07-11 . chapter 16OH, jeez. I should've figured it was Cillian Murphy. Your story's intriguing; I'm dying to find out what this thing they're looking for is. |
 Kimmae 2008-07-11 . chapter 15OH NO THE PUPPY! |
 Kimmae 2008-07-08 . chapter 11I think needless to say this is my favorite chapter of them all. Nice and intimate.
I did see a small oopsie though, I thought I'd just point it out. Bruce calls Anne Alice at the beginning of the chapter. |
 Kimmae 2008-07-08 . chapter 6O deception and stuff. It's slightly unfortunate that she picked a husky, 'caise they need like 5 walks a day. Maybe its good Bruce has a house the size of a Hamlet. |
 Sky-Pirate325 2008-07-03 . chapter 20An excellent ending!
Although I'd love to read a sequel.
Dxx
I had an idea for a Batman Begins story.
You know at the end of the movie, Bruce is in the car explaining how...that dude who used to run Wayne Enterprises had been fired and replaced with Lucius Fox.
Well the newspaper article was written by a woman called "Julie Ochipinti" so I was thinking of writing a story centered around her.
^3^
Do you think that'd work out? |