Oh, I didn't even know this story was here! I'm so glad to have re-discovered it! Here's hoping you will be able to give another chapter soon!

Hearts it!

Song and Zuko are sweet... and Ty Lee is awesome... ^.^

Swet, two marriages in one chapter. Lol, what would Zuko do without Kouji?!

Is this the calm before the storm? The Dai Li have been a bit quiet...

What can I say? Very well written and keeping us hanging, breathlessly. Good job, keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next installment!

I think this is my favorite chapter, for all the fluff, the friendships being formed, and the amusement I felt when reading Zuko's reaction to seeing a manageable schedule. XD This is a nice lead into the action that is to follow. I look forward to the rest, and am extremely glad you've said this will be a long fic.

I must say, I wasn't into the story too much at the beginning, but it has been getting a lot more interesting in the past couple chapters. I also feel that the writing has improved a lot; it's much more dynamic. I look forward to the next chapter. :D

Oh wow, I wasn't expecting that ending. I think I know who the mole is, but I'm never sure with this story.

I'm loving Kouji. He's so adorable.

Oh ho ho!! I can tell this is a GREAT fanfic already just because…

-my eye is TINGLING
-my loin cloth is a flyn’
-the idea is AHEMALICIOUS
-the grammar and style makes me want to jump at the computer screen in ecstasy
-the character is my type of woman
-the story has the qualities of a GREAT aheming fanfic
-the chapters are short making it easier for my eye to read
-I can skip some chapters and still know EXACTLY what’s going on
-The character is aheming scandalous and sexual (like me!)
-The characters aren’t restricted by the rules of the show they’re in
-Ahem is ALLOWED!
-The main character isn’t one of the whores, those being: Katara, Toph, Mei, Azula, Tai Lee, Suki, and even sometimes Fire Lord Ozai
-Slang is being put into use for once!
-Caps Lock is finally being noticed :D (he’s been so lonely in some of the other fanfic on here!)
-Worn out Japanese names are finally not in usage (Maybe next time try BRIANNA or JESSICA. Those are ahemalicious names!)
-My brother Bouldarian isn’t interested, which makes this story my new favorite thing EVER!
-The male characters aren’t some non-horny, coldhearted, oblivious dumbasses. MEN ARE ALWAYS HORNY! And I’m glad you, as an author, understand that ;)

Some suggestions to keep up the good writing are…

-Never let your character die! Your character must be invincible!!
-Always make sure every male character falls in love with your character. If they don’t that must mean your character is ‘unattractive’ (AHEM U-G-L-Y!)
-Bring in other OC’s!! The more the merrier!
-Let the original characters from the show take on NEW and INTERESTING personalities! The same old traits is BORING!
-Let a few scenes of AHEM slide hehehe
-Make sure to use as much punctuation as possible!
-Your character should possess NEW powers that have NOT been invented on the show! (feather bending, hair bending, wood bending, skin bending, love bending, etc)
-Your character should be the typical hottie! (Blonde hair, blue eyed! Hehe)

To finish up this review, I would like to say that I hope you continue with your ahem Fanfic! It has kept my eye ENTHRALLED up until the latest chapter and for that I give you props! Blarney to you! Don’t let anyone tell you that you’re a bad author or anything such as that!! If you’ve received a review from me, that must mean you’re AMAZING at writing because I am VERY picky about who I leave ahem reviews to!

All in all, very nice work my dearie! Your story is amusing and definitely worth my eye’s time! Make sure to keep up the good work and don’t be afraid to ahem me…er, I mean MESSAGE me for thanks, advice, ideas, etc!!

-Terra and Bouldarianananananaa

I hadn't read your story initially because the review didn't catch my eye. However, I wish to apologize for not doing so. It is very good, and I anxiously await the next update.

This is the most promising story I've seen in a while, and I eagerly await your next installment. You're kinda like the Robin Hood of the Avatar Fandom--you give to the people what has been robbed of us by the higher ups: a good story.

Yeah, I'm really loving this story.
I'm ashamed to admit that I forgot about little Song.
With the little information given to us via one ep, I think you did a fantastic job.
I love the dialog between Song and Zuko, and Song and Ursa (spoken and unspoken).
Yì Suì has also captured a bit of my heart!

Looking forward to the next chapter :o)

Man where do I start?
Oh yeah, maybe that your story is GREAT.
Lol wow was that cheesy
Okay -ahem- I first want to start out by saying that you have very good grammar. Because if there are two things I don't like, one is when people make no sense because they can't write, and two is when people don't make any sense because they use too many big words that shouldn't be there.
I love how simple you write, but at the same time it is mature and well thought out. You raise the chapter's main idea, and then dress around it with eloquently put together sentences, no-nonsense descriptions, and just a good way of writing.
Plus, I LOVE Song! Every other story I've ever read is so blah, but your's is so good! It just makes sense! I don't know any other way to say it. It is fun to read, and I like (as I said) the way you've put it together and it is believable. Yeah, thats it. Its believable. Its not so far-fetched in its storyline and neither is it too w.e. that its boring. But yet, there are parts of your plot that I can't see, and in that sense it makes it mysterious and open for you to switch around the whole thing and surprise people. That is another thing I like; you make it calm in the beginning, then you tense it with the battle wreckage part, then slowly advancing upon things. I can't stand it when stories are made so foreshadowed that its like

In the beginning, there was so's and so's.
They were masters of all.
Their powers were taken.
Would the so's and so's every see their powers again?
Or would they fight to the death with scrawny weapons and cheap armor and flaky love stories and blah blah till they got their stuff back.
The End.

Arrgh they're so stupid!

But your's, sheesh, you should keep writing. Really!
Good choice on making Zuko not have an arm, it makes it believable. There was no way they were going to be able to reattach the arm.

Keep at it,

Rotfl.

Ah!

Why did I type Jun?

I like the premise of this story, having Song do something that proves she's not just a weak victim.But there's some points you might want to work on.

1. Pacing.

You went a little too fast on the skirmish with the bandits, we just get a paragraph establishing they're stupid before Jun outwits them. I know that you don't want to spend too much time on minor characters, but the length is just long enough to tell us that they're probably coming back, but short enough so we don't feel attached to them. You said this was going to be a longfic, so you could maybe elaborate in them a bit more. Like give them distinct quirks, maybe a limp, or just a love for eating meat.

2. Song's Thoughts

You could tell us why she was going to warn Zuko and Iroh even after they betrayed her trust.

3. Anachronism

I'm pretty sure that there's no specific peace-keeping organization called the police in the Avatar-verse. They would probably be referred to as guards or watchmen. Similarly, Song's a healer, not a doctor. And since there's no Christianity in the Avatar-verse, I highly doubt that there's a hell.