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Reviews for: The End
berry0chan
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
So cute... ^_^
mialuv998
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
This was a wonderful little story. One little nit pick though, pursued means, 'to follow in order to overtake, capture, kill, etc.; chase'. In the sentence where you're using it you would want to use persuade which means 'to move by argument, entreaty, or expostulation to a belief, position, or course of action'.
a little girl blue
2008-06-27 . chapter 1
Aw! How KAWAII X3. Way too cute. X3
Lady Barbossa329
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
Love the one shot! Good job!
HelenTheShortOne
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
That was so sweet.
I love crack pairrings.
Thanks for the fic.
Your great!
Caliraphy
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
Nuu, I can't believe it only goes to one chapter *sniffs* But still... this was great! o.o
MischievousPuck
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
This was too sweet. Very enjoyable makes me root for this pairing. Good job.
CobaltHeart
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
-giggles- This was just so cute. ^-^ I love this pairing...gosh I'm a crack fanatic aren't I? lol
NotaPunk
2008-06-08 . chapter 1
U did great! It was sweet yet a bit funny.
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