omg *falls over dead* that was amazing so much detail without taking too much time the whole begining middle and end was mind blowing plese right another chapter mabye with a time skip to the next time they meet please!?!?!?!?!

Gasp! That was great! You write them pretty well for a pairing that you don't really like. Bravo my dear. That was very deep. Oh and hot! But i really loved the start with all the musings on love. Those quotes are fabulous by the by. What a great way to get inspired.
Cheers
Meg

Wow! That was such a good first shot at a real yaoi scene! Great job! I can't wait to see when you finally do a kakanaru lemon for "Behind Closed Doors." Sasunaru is great and everything but I like kakanaru so much better, as I'm sure you do too. Oh and I don't really feel like reviewing twice, but I vote for a happy ending for "Behind Closed Doors." I don't want it to be sappy, just not overly depressing with a million character deaths. Sorry this is pretty rambling but I'm kinda reviewing for two stories here. Anyway, I love them both and keep up the good work!