I love this! And i can't wait till you dicide to post the next chapter. I bet--no i know it will be worth the wait.

I laughed so hard at the end lmfao.

Peolpe have already commented on the number difference so i'll just leave it be but all I have to say is great job Kabuto. That's a great job at remaining under cover. Reavaling information that nobody could possibly know unless they were told or werer spying. Real smart.

Don't worry about that guy he's a major douche. If he's want's to stop reading your stories because of one thing he didn't like than screw him. He dosen't deserve to read your stories. Keep up the great work.

Good start so far the naer rape scene would be a little much if it actually went all the way but it didn't so it's fine. Keep it up because I find Naruto Sasuke pairings enjoyable only when one of them are female. Truthfully I've only ever scene three Naruto female Sasuke stories but this is still much better than the evil, evil yaoi. Great Job.

i really like this story i cant wait till you update

Please update soon...I love your story!

What's with the Sakura bashing? You should leave your dislike of characters out of fics. It's juvenile, unprofessional, and ruins the story. Not that your fic is particularly original anyway...but it is better written than the other stories that have the SAME EXACT PLOT.

Excellent! Update ASAP!

I CANT WAIT FOR MORE! I loved the way naruto won the fight against hinata! Hinata was almost declared winner and naruto congratulated her and she FAINTED! though now that sasuke's match is next with gaara I'm worried! Naruto is worried sick waiting in the competitors box, orochimaru in the kage box with sarutobi and tsunade (the WILL be 5th, RIGHT?! she WONT die in the invasion, RIGHT?) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I LOVE THE STORY! :3

After i've read my comment i relised that mistake i've made. lol
I was ment to say he or she should nread ur fanfic.=P

U GO GIRL or r u a male =D Tell that idiot who's the boss! just bcz u change the gender doesn;t mean the story is not good. if i was u i would bash him or her up for that comment. She shouldn't read it in he beginning. ARg*

love the story espicly how naruto wins. thou i am a little worried about hinata finding out about naruto being a girl. thou im sure you have that planed out aready.

Tsk.. ohh you cocky, little, bastard Sasuke *shakes head*

Well, I loved you explaination on the Kaze no Kaiten. Logical and practical. And then I loved how Naruto "won" Hiashi's statement it quite true I really liked how you did Hinata ^^

And that wasn't exactly the biggest clifhanger. Truly, until a fanfic ends, it could be thought that the end of every chapter is a clifhanger. Really, I think that was a nice wrap-up to this chapter. It leaves you anticipating(sp) the next cahpter, but cleans up the main points in the chapter. Nice :)

Can't wait till the next one ^^

very very interesting. update soon