Ah, this was good :)
I like how you portray their character, cause there's alot of ways to do it, but I got the feeling that this Naruto really would do anything for Sasuke <3 Which is so true.

Like the info at the bottom too, especially 4,5 and ten. I figgured out 8 all on my own xD; It sucked.

This made me smile. This was more like a what not to do fan fiction ^_^ i thought it was very creative how they didn't actually end up having sex. I also liked how you made Sasuke think that the entire thing was some-what gross. I mean seriously shoving your fingers up someones ass really doesn't sound all that appealing. I think this was a really good fic! Thanks for writing this because it shows that almost everyone on fancitcion that writes SasuNaru or NaruSasu lemons has the same thing in mind, that they have to go all the way. I really think it was smart how they ended it instead of pressing teh very (ahem) awkward situation Great job!

It's good to know you haven't changed in your all consuming God complex. Nice condescending rant at the end. I'm glad your dialogue got better over the ~years~

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You have my whole-hearted support for this story. The story itself was funny and refreshing. Your 10 Truths are absolutely true. And besides, if you scream out instructions during sex, it's a bit like being the backseat driver now isn't it. Thank you for writing this, I thouroughly enjoyed reading it.

Liz

this had to be the most realistic sex sceen i hav ever read and it was cute and i still think that naruto is a silly little kid no matter how old or experianced people try to make him you can't take away that little kid feel... and remember to change your light bulbs and pay your power bill...

you had some good tips and hope fully they will help me in writeing better sceens and stories 10Q (say it out loud)

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I LOVED the realistic-ness of it all :)
Very well done to you! :D

I fucking love you. No, no. I WORSHIP YOU. Not to be creepy or anything, but I have been waiting for a fic like this FOR-FUCKING-EVER. I have never agreed with the whole "seme/uke" bullshit, and I'm so glad I found a writer who feels the same. It really pisses me off sometimes!

I died laughing, I honestly did. I would point out some of my favorite parts, but really, I loved the whole thing. And Naruto with chest hair is really sexy. And the whole "10 Truths About Sex" was amazing. And true. Why don't they teach us this shit in Sex Ed? This is the kind of information today's youth is lacking!

In short, you win. You absolutely win.

woo xD now that was something!

omg, this was perfect ahaha. ngl i was a little disappointed that they didn't actually have sex, BUT. you captured them both beautifully. XD so wonderfully awkward, oh man.

as for the end notes, i agree with everything. i, personally, cannot actually speak during sex, and my boyfriend and i laugh very often.

wow. that was amazing. thank you. thank you SO much for writing this. it's ridiculously sad that most fanfiction has perfect sex scenes. so i tip my hat to you. way to go.~

Haha this was really...realistic

I agree completely about the seme-uke thing, it really bugs me when in a fanfic one person is really uke-like and one person is seme-like and it stays like that lol

Great!

i don't know about making your day but you just made mine! i could totally see that happening with those two! also i was getting so sick and tired of all the overly fluffy lemons! it was nice to read something like this! alot of lemons i read don't really seem real, it was nice to read a story that took a more realistic point on this. i also hate the designated seme/uke roles, especially when one of them is really girly! especially in the naruto fandom! even haku isn't really girly! and you would never catch one of the other boys acting like a little girl. hell even the girls don't! great oneshot!!

I ADORE you for this fic! I really really do, and the amazingly true stuff about sex had me grinning like an idiot. Anyone who does that to me is hella good in my book. Hope you continue on this theme. :)

I actually get bored by the overwhelming lemons (straight or gay) that contain the perfect sex scenes, and on top of that feel like sometimes it's like my favorite characters have an evil two dimensional twin that just happen to share a name. I have skipped scenes if the story is good n long enough or clicked out of a box.

Your story made me enjoy the fact that Sasuke And Naruto were themselves. I was happy to read through even though sometimes I can't handle yaoi.