good story. it was different as you didn't have one of them going down in a gunfight or similar but i like it this way - maybe even more realistic then a gunfight!

*sniff* Wow, great story - just how I would expect everyone to react. Well done! :)

Depressing end but understandable.

Wow was that powerful. I don't usually read Character death stories but this one begged to be read. You did an amazing job capturing everyone's emotions.

Great Fic poor john

wah!cry T.T

This is so great, but so sad at the same time!

I swear, I'm sitting here trying not to cry while I type this!

Waah! Poor John and everbody!

Godd job keeping everyone in character, though :).

You made me go all teary :( Hm. Difficult to be nice about a deathfic, however it was nicely written. In a horribly sad kind of way! *sniffles*