That was so beautiful! And so sad T_T
Poor Yue, I wish that maybe Sokka could see her one last time before the show ends.

Well, being this one of my favourite Avatar fanfics, I suppose I'll have to review the translation as well!
It's a very nice translation and I dare to say that some lines show much meaning here than in the spanish one, like the "And the boy sees in the girl's silver eyes..." one. I felt much more in it than in the original (maybe because I find Spanish cheesier than English)
Anyway, I love it! Going to favourites... again!

loved it. great job and don't worry about the grammart. i think you've done a wonderful job with english being your second language. great job

really nice one-shot
about Yue ^^
i like how you used
to decribe both Yue's
hair and Toph's eyes ;D

That was very beautiful. Good job!

It was prety good actually, and this one shows more love interest between Sokka and Toph that the spanish version, good translation by the way, and I must say in the inmortal words of a famous meat heat we all love:

"Thanks! That warms my heart!"