No~! The flow of chapters stopped! Now I have to wait. Damn...

Well, I want to assure you of my undying loyalty. *fancy kneel* Your story has started off well, and it left me with a good feeling. For that, I'll wait forever, though I don't want to (if you understand what I mean by that). Please update as soon as possible for you.

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Thank you for the updates so far.

Ooh! I've been waiting for this! Or, at least, something like this. Thanks for starting to write this. I wonder how you'll plot things out? I'm really excited, I can barely keep my composure! (if I haven't already lost it) (^-^;) Thanks lots.

hey pretty good chaps. ^_^ i just wish they'd do something to cut off all the practiced lines in the game. what if link was sick with "rolling" with all of the game. maybe he rebels??!! =DD and karina helps. that would be fun. hehe. ok anywayy, can't wait for the next chap. i'm still a little confuzzled, but hopefully that will be explained soon. heh.

This sounds like another comic I've read so time ago. Tell me, have you read "Sorceress of Secrets"? before. I'm not sure if the title is correct, but the device is amazingly similar.

But enough about other peoples stories, lets talk about yours. This is an interesting self-insertion, but it seems to flow a little too easily. What I mean is, wouldn't either of them be startled by the sudden connection between them? I know for sure I would freak out if I started hearing voices in my head, especially of the opposing gender.

Also, try adding some more originality to this. We already know the plot of OOT, but try adding something a little different.

Sorry for all the junk, but I believe this could be a good story with a little work. The manga I was talking about is actually published now, so I'm sure you'll have a good audience with this.

Good luck and keep up the good work

Signed
Kouta Aburame

Excellent work. Not extremely long, no textwall, I'm very pleased with this. Keep it coming!

hey i liked it. just a little confusing. i don't get how karina is inside his body and how it at all happened to be that way. back up pweaze?? lol. anyway, i hope that gets explained in the next chap. so update soon! =D