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DarthBill 2008-07-18 ch 1,	abuseI have to say that this is a freaking awesome concept. The hulk is like the exact opposite of Shinji. I look forward to updates.
gspida25 2008-07-15 ch 1,	abusegod dame, dude you have created a work of art right here. It is so well writen and you add a new mythos to the hulk, cool i would have never exspected that. Do you have plans on giving shinji a love interset like asuka or soom one new? I bet you could fit the ABOMINATION, OBSORBING-MAN, and THE LEADER into the story deppending on how deep into the story you want to get. Once again great work I like to see more down the road. (P.s.s Forgive the spelling im in a rush)
NamelessHeretic 2008-07-03 ch 1,	abuseO lawd, The Incredible Shinji!
straightedgebigevil 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abuseNice job keep it up
NemesisZero 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuseWell, that actually kinda works as a crossover. Good choice. would have been nice if you had avoided simply retelling so many scenes with little or no difference from the original, though.
gunman 2008-06-13 ch 1,	abusePretty good story. And a real good place to start Shinji's transformation. And you're right, I don't think I've seen a story where Shinji became the Hulk. Heck, I've written him up as Daredevil and psudo-Ghost Rider, and I've got a couple other ideas in the works. So having a Hulk-Shinji story works good. Especially for the upcoming Hulk movie. Also you put alot of detail into this story. (Like Shinji's eyes turning green from blue) Which is good to see. But you also do something original which fits into the story rather well... you have Shinji and Unit 01 physically attack the 5th Angel, which I've never seen before. It is kinda difficult since it's defensive powers are amazingly high and its energy beam can lock onto anything that gets into its blast radius. Though it's firing time is off since it needs to recharge after every blast, which leaves it vulnerable. The only problem I had with it, was that given where the Angel and the Eva were positioned during the operation, Shinji must have been moving like The Flash in order to reach it before it could fire or raise it's shield. It's a little hard to believe that the Eva could be that fast. Also, you're probably aware of this, but there is another Eva-Hulk story on this Eva site, one in which Misato gets doused with radiation when she is in JetAlone. Though the author at this point has yet to transform Misato into a She-Hulk, considering where they're going with the story, it seems likely. This was really good. Keep up the good work. Write on!
dylanredefined 2008-06-13 ch 1,	abuseshinji as the hulk ?could be a fun idea you write well more please
Greydon Creed 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseGood story, was a little surprised that Shinji did not lose mental control. I would have expected him to go into a rage similar to the Eva going berserk, but then again, we haven't seen him REALLY angry yet. :) This plus Shinji having so far only increased strength and healing is interesting. Since Shinji is going to be meeting Asuka soon, I hope you are willing to listen to a suggestion - don't have Kensuke and Touji tag along. There is no real point to having them along on a military/NERV mission (they were only comic relief for that ep), and if Shinji does spin out on Asuka on the carrier, I don't think they would be able to control their fear of Shinji or even keep the knowledge of his rages secret. Looking Forward to More.
Electric Eclectic 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseWell, well. An Eva/Hulk Crossover, nice job! This has peaked my intrests!
KuMardagg 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseShinji already has a tendency to go berserk, which usually works out to his benefit. It will be interesting to see what happens when that aspect gets an extra nudge. This chapter reads well. No complaints! Looking forward to more.
Brax The Great 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseHey there, CenturyChild533! A very great start to a darn fic you've got here! Hope you update soon...and by the way, you have anonymous reviews disabled for your story
mangafreak7793 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abusepretty good
orionpax09 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseArgghh! I know, I guess I shouldn't be surprised by this, but here I was, working on my own Eva/Hulk story, and then I find that somebody else had launched one! Sigh. Don't get me wrong, I'm not mad, but...oh, well. Onto the review. I like how you've blended the events into the original Eva series. It works very well, and I'm looking forward to seeing what event pushes Shinji over the edge. My guess; the arrival of the Red Devil! Anyway, best of luck to you.
King of Darkness 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseOK. You've gotten my attention. Now, lets see where you go with this. Good Luck!
Jess D 2008-06-08 ch 1,	abuseI stand and applaude you my friend, on an amazing job well done. I do so in the fact that just a week or three ago, I found a fourm here on , in order to put up ideas for stories that I've had bouncing around in my head for some time. Yet, could never find the time to write any of them down as life as teacher took too much time from me. I too, after seeing previews for the upcoming Incredible Hulk film, got in my head an idea for an Eva/Hulk story. Plus, you are right, Shinji's character in place of Bruce Banner makes prefect sense for this version. Both share a bad history with their fathers, both abusive and responsible for breaking their son's psyche. So much so that they buried their negativity deep within, and let it fester into a rage of unimaginable destructive power. Again, I appluade you for this wonderful job well done, and am glad that someone else, besides me, saw the potential in this type of univseral crossover. Good job, and I plan keeping track of your story, reading whatever updates show up whenever I have time to read them. Until the next update, keep up the great work.

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