Interesting take on it. I liked it.

absolutly totally brilliant!
...this is the kind of anger and the kind of passionatate aggressive relationship that i see them on the edge of..although with a lot of potential for lighter and gentler moments...but Sam's been through all that and Ruby is after all a demon by nature so in the end i think with those two its just explosive...which u captured really really really well!...hopefully somewhere down the line they stop making that prejudiced distinctions between demons and humans and that good and evil is just black n white..start exepting grey...and maybe emotions by could involve something other than hate and anger...oh well..!also...i definatly liked blond Ruby better..but u never know,this one might grow on me..!
...i hope u write more on this...do continue it,it has good potential to become a fic...but in its own as well i think its a powerful piece!...u did a great job!hats off!

Cool. Catch ya on the flip side.

Oh, I really liked this. Sam and Ruby are so messed up but this was great. I like how you used the senses for each scene. Nice job.

awe! this is -wonderful! I really dig the way you seperated the story into the five senses... really good style!
got some more...? ;)

Wonderful! You know how to use yours words. It was emotional and flowed very well. I would love to read more of your stories. I love the very first line. It's as if every sense he has is in tune to her. Nice job. I love this pairing.