UPDATE WOMAN.
>:D

"we’ll see how much they enjoy pulling knives from their faces…”
That made me LOL.
:]
And I'm so glad you used the whole, 'Claire's miracle blood' thing.
=D

And the plot thickens...
But, one thing: The part where West turns on the light to look out the window, I was thnking: "But if he turns on the light, the window will be all reflecty, won't it?"
Cuz, you know how, if it's bright inside, you have to pull the curtain around you so you don't see your own reflection?
Just me and my silly random realizations.
:P

"after all, what is Heroes without gratuitous amounts of action and awesome powers?) ;D"

LAME IS WHAT IT WOULD BE.
=D

“I’m still mad at you for leaving me all alone with the drunken mob and my stripper cousins,”

LOLOLOL

It's like Claire's the dude, and West's the chick.
=D

Wonderful Dah'ling.
:]

:D
HOWDY PARTNER.
I like, I like.
One suggestion though:
"Claire called from the basement, shaking her hand as her charred fingers recovered and pushing herself up from the floor as a small cloud of smoke floated towards the ceiling."

You should replace the 'and' between 'recovered' and 'pushing' with a comma.
:3

So it'll be:
"Claire called from the basement, shaking her hand as her charred fingers recovered, pushing herself up from the floor as a small cloud of smoke floated towards the ceiling."

: D

Great story please update soon and btw i think claire n west should adopt molly! lol

Again, I know it'll be a while, but...

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE (not rushing you or anything)...

I like it it's funny as keep up dating! :-P

more chapters please !
I really like this story

next chapter please...