I really liked this. Though, I think my favorite parts were the part where Kankuro "thinks" he knows what Gaara and Matsuri are doing, then the part about Gaara's and Kankuro's misscommunication. I would have loved to see Gaara'a reaction if he knew what Kankuro was talking about!

lmfao kankuro thought summin else lol great story and i love the couple =D

COME ON! WRITE MORE! WHY DO ALL THE AUTHORS I ACUALLY ENJOY READING HAVE TO END SO SUDDENLY, OR TAKE FOR EVER WRITING!!??
PLEASE! PLEASE! WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!


PLEASE!?

OMG! I TOTALY THINK GAARA IS SEX-EY! i also love Matsuri, she's so nice and totaly loves gaara! They should do something like that in the real Naruto Shippuden and do more echii stuff!
And love ur story! cant wait to see what happens!!keep on writing girl/dude! and yes i am a girl, chick, female, dudett, woman, what ever u people call me... BYES!!

that is so romantic of Gaara to do that. and Matsuri totally wants it, they really should do this! haha
Kankuro is too funny! XD the miscommunications at the end were my favorite, haha. :)

Miscommunicating is a hilarious experience for onlookers.

Superb idea!

Kankuru was so wrong:P

GaaMatsu for ever!

Ah, the joys of miscommunication. They make lovely humor plots for fanfics indeed.
You pulled this off fantastically. I could feel a grin creeping across my face when I read the exchange between Gaara and Kankuro. ;)

kankuro is so nosy... lol
the story was really hilarious!
kankuro's expressions was really funny...
the story was also very very well written...
great job!
write some more please...
^_^

LOL! Awesome!
Poor Kankurou's all smug that Gaara's taking his advice on how to do well in bed! LMAO! Awesome story!

this is so cute! kankuro's a dork!

DarkC

Fluffy humor, I say. FLUFFEH. ♥

*faved*

I really loved it! Gaara and Matsuri make the perfect couple. Are you planning on doing another GxM?

You are too hard on yourself; this was hilarious! I love the concept of it!
-snickers- Poor Kankuro. But how fun it is to torture him!

OH MY GOD! *rolls on the floor laughing* This has to be the most well-written funny story I have ever read! 'The joys of miscommunication', lol.
It is amazing how well you have combined the real events with what Kankuro was imagining, good job! Poor, poor Gaara... He has such a perverted brother! Hopefully, it's not contagious or anything...
I wonder what would Gaara do if he found out what Kankuro was actually referring to? Maybe he would show his brother an improved technique (of the Desert Coffin). ^_^
But again, their family is anything but normal, so what can I expect?
Your stories are great and I truly like your style and your way of playing with the words. Not to mention that they are very descriptive, so...Omedeto gozaimasu! *bows before you*
*Christine*