hehe, a little OOC. this is exactly what we all love about this pairing! ;D hilarious and cute fic, too bad she now has no more left. ;)

Ooh!

Love this!
Aah, the cheeky prosecutor! "Kiss me, if you dare."
Something good - for a change.
As the pessimist I am, I'll have to critize you. Don't take any offence--your fanfic is awesome!

Ema Skye hates Klavier Gavin. Would she really kiss him just for a minisucle(can't spell) piece of Snackoo? We know she loves the food, yes but she could have just gone home and opened another packet.
I know that kinda takes the point of the story to the grave, but try writing something just that much more believable.
But trust me, your "kiss" details were perfect - I should know, because I've written/read a lot of romance fanfics.

At least you didn't use an OVER dose of German - just a hint like yours is good.

Hope there's a sequel - there just aren't enough LONG Klavier and Ema fanfics out there.

Oh dear! Short, sweet and well-written! My favorite pairing of AJ, too! Love, love!

Oh my god.
that was so awesome i loved to way too much!! ema x klavier is my OTP and you sure captured the both of them really well!!
and you know what else? this story reminds me so much of this fanart I'd seen before..
http :// squeegoddess . deviantart . com / art / Snackoos-n-Glimmerous-Fops-Too-78699707
Check it out! :D

That was awsome! I really like your story, but I'm curious about Ema's reaction, when ha meets him again. That would probably be interesting. The Snackoo idea was great, and there's some German inside =) I'm from Germany, so I like that ^^ But there are two small mistakes in the translation. "Do not worry" in German is more like "Keine Sorge" or "sorge dich nicht" (the first one is used more often) and when you write "Kiss me, if you dare", it has to be "Küss mich, wenn du dich traust". Altogether it is a great story and I would love to read a sequel. Maybe you'll find some time to write one =)

OMG! this is a really good story. poor snackoo, though. had to endure that lolz.

This was really a joy to read. Now I want more of this couple! =D

Great story =) I liked the way you portrayed the characters, but do take care to watch your tenses. They flip around sometimes. Yeah, anyway great job =)

D'aw, so very cute. Careful with tenses though, you seem to change from past to present a few times.

Klavier is soo cute there! Really, if you keep this as a serial story it's going to be good. They're such a cute couple!

Nice, in-character story. Good job, write more PW/AJ ones! :D

cute 'n funny. Great job :D

That was a really fun story! I'm going to go read some of your other ones, I enjoyed this a lot. My only suggestions: watch your tenses, they flip around a lot, and a little German- I believe the command form of "kiss me" is "Kuss mich", unless he's speaking formally when it would be "Kussen mich"...just a little pointless German grammar, sorry.