... So... big, massive, gigantic, amazing squee. I haven't read such a concise but still well-rounded fic in a while, particulary a dialogue heavy one, that still managed to remain playful and hilarious and in character. Wow.

Gut reaction - Ha ha ha ha ha!

Brain reaction - That was such a great idea, Pepper being Pepper no matter what and Tony just flabber-gasted over it.

nice.
~Luna

That was, in a word, sublime. Pitch perfect humor, Tony at his whiny best, Pepper at her most organized. I loved every line. Brilliance!

~ Verona

this is a wonderful story, the ending made me smile :)are you going to continue it or not?

I love this story. Love love love. It is absolutely adorable. This story is one of those which inspire my own writing; I really respect people who keep their characters SO in, well, CHARACTER, that it's really easy to imagine the story.

Great job.

so cute! haha...

Jesus HAHAHA!
I totally forgot that the default listign on the archive page was K->T
Man... This was so freakishly funny! And the part where he says Ironman is a job description? Fabulous.
Also the best thing was that you didn't go into long winded descriptions of the nakedness and the sex. What are our heads for anyway?

i like it. good job. not graphic but stil has that comedy

Bravo! That was hot! Loved it. Write more like these =)

Haha that's hilarious.

lol haha. i like it, it really funny!

Really funny :~)

Good job!

Cheers
AJ

very cool story, love it when they take their relationship to the next level. very funny that tony is the one tired out and pepper is still going strong. please write again.