It's very good! Would've been better with someone else though.. *Detests Hitomi.. and Van.*

eh...it was pretty good but i personaly prefer the dillandau 1 _ and i dun like Hitomi dissin Van's hair -_- i like Van's hair! well keep up the good work!*Marisusa*

On the contrary, after some of the "poems" I have just slogged through, this one was a breath of fresh air. I enjoyed. I particularly like the last three lines. Your use of imagery was good throughout,a nd you didn't fall back on cliche and ambiguous mush. Overall very nice _

Oh my gosh I love your poem so much! Goodluck in the future if you write more are very talented you should write more!

That was exceptionally good... i mean, yeah. it's clear... LUCID would be the right word to describe it. -

no reviews I love this poem! It was so sweet! I love any Van/Hitomi! Keep up the good work...and thaxnx for reviewing!