o, I really liked these drabbles! A/J before George rocks completely, and you write it amazingly! :) -rowena

Cute!

These were all really entertaining and well-written. I especially loved seeing the thought patterns of Jon and Alanna in "movement" and "flowing".

why did you combine them? i think the effect is better if they are all in separate chapters. it is much more pleasing to read them that way. The drabbles are all still amazing, though. :-)
-ewp

Nice, as always. That was a great ending. You're fab.

GOOD GOD! *passes out into dead faint* HELLO. That was... intense. I think I need a cold shower.

I think you captured perfectly the essence of Jon and Alanna's relationship beautifully. I'm a hard core AlannaGeorge shipper, though, just because they're so awesome together. I used to support A/J, but now I've realized that Alanna would have made for a terrible queen (can you imagine her holding court?). Bravissimo! Magnifique!
Cheers!
dormouse

Haha. Great story! Can't beleive it came to an end! Ah well all stories need to have an ending. but great job with the fic! I hope I see more of your work!

great drabble. I thought at first maybe he was using magic, but i like your reason better.

**. I've truly never read any FIC from Tamora Pierce that's had the two characters sexual events been explained like that.

Gorgeous!

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yay! another great story complete.

great ending :D

hahahaha...too funny :D

this was a great story...cant wait to see if you have any other drabbles ^^

Haha! Gorgeous! This final drabble was the perfect one to end the series. Wonderfully gorgeous! The last paragraph was a great conclusion to both the series and to the singular drabble. Magic, I say, MAGIC! You have me entranced, my dear. I almost wish there were more...but I can't, because this was the perfect ending. Damn. I've trapped myself.
Ah well. As I've told some of my other favorite writers, "You can have your cake and eat it too, but only in the middle. Once it's gone, you can only reflect on how wonderful it was."
The same always goes for you, my dear, with every story you write.
Right, so, that said, let's move on to the next cake!
=DD
kt