This is a GREAT story!

you did a great job!

great job! and i loved the welcome home fun at the end, that was cute :)

i know, i'm kinda late finding this, but you have done a great job!

nice one! And once again the boys are thinking about themselves and not Bella at all! got their personalities down pat, including the destructive controlling issues. Well done!

Aw that was beautiful! And i loved your little bit of fun at then end- extremely funny and sweet! Thank you so much! This story is great! x

Hey- sorry for only reviewing this far in, I was in a complete trance due to your story! It is fantastic! You write really well and I loved in the earlier chapter "our tone" its beautiful and makes perfect sense! Of course I would not have imagined Edward to always say Hell a lot but that is the only bit of tiny constructive criticism I can give because the rest is perfect !(although your story is finished now so it has no consequence) I would like to tell you that I really love your sotry and will review again if I can break my glance from the screen P! x

I Love It

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Yay! I would have read more but.. I have to go to bed... *Sigh*

Lmao Well I will resume reading it tomorrow night or the next day. Hell! why would you care?

Lmao

Oh well I told you anyway.

Bella

I agred with you love and obsession came together for them at least.

Wonderful portrayal of Edward. So easy to believe. You have a way of bringing the story alive, although one we know, this POV makes perfect sense. You can just feel the pain at points! Amazing! Thank You.

I loved the bit with Edward and his family... how lovely? :)

Lovley :)

Im only reveiwing because...

1) I loved this chapter far more than the others and thought that your invented dialogue was great!

2) And because although i think it would be quite funny... I would prefer it if Jacob did not imprint on Edward/ Edward falls in love with a tree as i did quite like the original story line!

Very Good...