A great story. Very good.

This is a good summary, but are you going to do a full story? I'm a little confused.

Please update! I do wish more people would write about this couple. I wonder what's going to happen now when Aravis arrives at the castle of King Lune... Thanks for writing!

Please update your Jane Austen fics!
They are so well written and in character--I almost cried
with happiness finding one with Darcy and Elizabeth that
adhered to Jane Austen's original.

Great story! Thanks for writing this! This is awesome! God bless!

Ooh, you've written Aravis very well, and it's refreshing to see this among all of the Prince Caspian fic. I like how you wrote her backstory, and the end is perfect. Great job.

Your writing sounds a lot like C.S. Lewis'... very interesting! Good job so far :)