more more more!!! this is so good! i like fan-fics where Ranma stops being such a twit, and Ryoga gets some sense knocked into him!!!!!

I don't like it. Ranma and Ryoga, discusting!! You are a good writer, with interesting ideas, but MY opinon and reaction to the subject matter is not a good one. Some may disagree and that is fine. I just respond on how I feel and reacted to it.

Ran: Whoa......intense. Very intense. I like it. I probably like this fic even more 'cause Ra/Ryo fics are the only yaoi fics that I read.
Shin: Cool as hell. Is Ranma gay or is he a Bi? I don't quite get it. I look forward to what the gods have to say. Keep it up. Hope the next one is out soon.

I like dark fics- this ones good so far too. But he doesn't love akane no more? I think i might cry! *Sniff* I hope your * sniff* happy now!

I like dark fics- this ones good so far too. But he doesn't love akane no more? I think i might cry! *Sniff* I hope your * sniff* happy now!

Well, that would explain a certain someone's sense of betrayal and anger.

"There is no gray in this world." That seems like an excellent line to wrap this story around, and very Ranma, as well. I imagine he's always had his personal code. There have always been admirable evil villains with a powerful code of honor (Milton's Satan comes to mind). And Ranma has always tried to make his own way, outside the strictures of those who would bind him, whether perverted master, ancient amazons, parents, or fiances. His very existance is that of being "the nail that sticks up" in a society that values conformity. This is just an expansion of that.

Extremely far away from the canon Ranma, but perhaps with surprising overlaps in terms of spirit and attitude.

Sick! plian sick.......... but i like!!!!!! please it will be scar if akane walkes in right now

wow. write more. that is gooooooood.

Great story. I can't wait to see where you go with it. It seems as if this price of darkness specificly sought Ranma out, right? So why wait until now? Perhaps you will explain later. Take it easy.

that was really really good. please write more soon. COOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

You. . . you make another chapter, yes?? YES??!?!?!? MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER DURNIT!!!!!! -Chibikat

More!!

That is so good!! Very dark, but that just makes it better. MORE MORE MORE!! I love this!

Please don't listen to Max Yui. He's obviously an escapee from the mental ward. I see a possible crossover with OMG! and SM in the works here. And what are the chances Ranma is going to willingly work for the Lord of Darkness?

oooohhhhh. how interesting. i like it, nice and dark. i look forward to future developments. thanks for sharing the story.