YAY! im so happy! but please make them confess soon!

Oh, this story is a good one! I love good stories.
:D

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :]

*cries* Please write more!! I like crying! *cries some more*

so sad... T_T

Damit!! run Roxas run!

good chpter, I love your choice of words

UPDATE. fool.


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lazy x

D:

They are just simply adorable together! Roxas is the emo king indeed. :/ Argh. I don't even know what to say. My mood was just filled with sorrow after ending this... So sad.

But the sadness of this chapter is what makes it so great...!

I guess?

Blah, anyway. I'd love to read more. :)

PLEASE PLEASE! MAKE A 4TH CHAPTER! I LOVED IT! U DESCRIBED THE CHARACTERS PREFECTLY N DID A TWIST ON UR ON THAT WE DIDNT NOTICE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

did u know my name its a nickname for larxene?

Beautiful. And I never say that word :P

But, really, I love this story, it's so descriptive and even in drama it's calm. Your style of writing is inspirational :)
Your writing makes me tingle :P

SERIOUSLY update soon. The story is amazing

x

I’d just like to take this opportunity to thank my online sister, Ame, for helping me with this. XD

aww.. touchy. I actually did nothing much. cuz you're hell of a good writer anyway =]

i've reviewed this before.. LOL.. so.. ermm.. haha..

i'm just saying that you should still continue writing despite the negative comments of whatever. treasure the criticisms and the positive comments =]

ILU.

hugs

ame yamexD

he. 8D'

i love love love this fic. :P can't wait for you to update. LOL. ...so i can rant on the last chappie !! HAHA.

Great chapter

O who gave him CPR? Hope it was Nam and not... her mother :T

I don't really know why but in the two chapters I have read although there is like a bit of drama and stuff there is this overall calmness ... ish. lol
Let me explain a little more: it kinda reminds me of a double page manga picture of a calm scene with cherry blossoms floating by ... or something. I DUNNO. Wow, I sound kinda strange. Oh well...
I lOve how you depict Roxas in this story as well :]

Yeah, I think I will wrap this up:

keep up the fantastic work!

update soon too.

lazy x

Great first chapter, it was so descriptive and like deep :]

LOved it. I just can't help but go 'aww wee Roxas!' though. It was so cute and I really like the kinda gentle humour in it, like it isnt too overpowering

everything has a nice balance

anyway again I just loved the way you conveyd Roxas' thoughts n stuff

lazy x

Great chapter! Im really looking forward to your next update! This was an aweshome start! (yeah i meant to spell aweshome that way! cause its just aweshome!) O.O *pokes Roxas with a stick* wakie wakie!

loved it! you bring the emotions very well. I dunno any of the charas but I totally felt with them. *huggles Roxas* Very well written, you have a great writing style. Am looking forward to chapter two

Really good! Poor Roxas...I'm assuming Namine likes Sora?
Well anyway, I guess I'll find out once you update the next chapter.

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