 DaxLP 2008-10-11 . chapter 5Ah, the Drunken Date, thankfully I've never had the misfortune of seeing that. Drunken Relatives on the other hand... (shudder)
I don't really mind if this is a filler chapter, if they're all as hilarious as this, bring 'em on. :) The quality of this filler is exceptional, usually most fillers are low quality pieces of garbage that the authors throw in without a thought. This one was actually very entertaining to read, a nice change from the usual filler material. :) In this case, elaborate kicked simple's rear. :)
Overall, I like this story. Original idea, written well, doesn't want to make me smash my head against a brick wall from lack of planning, must be good. Do you think you could slip more things like this in on the odd occasion (puppy dog eyes)? |
 Morbious20 2008-10-05 . chapter 5Great chapter ^^ keep it up cause I'm looking forward to the wave mission ^^, if you include it that is. |
 Knives91 2008-09-26 . chapter 5Most excellent. Keep at it! |
 DarkRavie 2008-09-26 . chapter 5Very good fic. I can't wai tto read what happens in your next chapter. |
 axel3512 2008-09-26 . chapter 5Nice work, Raven, i like how you didnt give the kyuubi to naruto but instead gave him a clan, i see plenty of potentol in this story though i am curious how the Gaara Arc is gonna go. This story is one of your best ever. :P |
 Jase and the dark three 2008-07-15 . chapter 4roflmao so whopsnext? sheesh talk about taugh lol cant wait till the next chapters and all |
 My Solitude 2008-07-02 . chapter 4This story is so sweet! I just had to laugh! Keep up the good work, yo. I'm waiting for the chapter you'll host next. |
 luzopi 2008-07-02 . chapter 4Nice chapter! I like the training course, it sounds cool. ^^ I was surprised that Ino and Kiba are put with Naruto. Is there any reasoning for that? Like, maybe they're a scouting team, assassination team, etc. ? Just curious. xP |
 Morbious20 2008-07-01 . chapter 4Great chapter ^^ Hopefully with Itachi as his Sensei Sasuke will smarten up. |
 jedielfsorcerer 2008-07-01 . chapter 4very interesting story. so far for couples later in the story, i could maybe see naruto and hinata. or naruto and ino when she turns to be a true ninja. |
 Knives91 2008-07-01 . chapter 4...so, anyone want to play, "catch the kunai with your teeth?"
Great stuff. Keep at it! |
 Miss Finnish 2008-07-01 . chapter 4CANT WAIT FOR MORE! now I know I LOVE the story! and am really looking fowared to kakashi's genin test since naruto knows the bell test I cant wait to see what was the 'survival' test the 3 teams ALL are going to do!! so PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 Lloyd Neruameshi 2008-07-01 . chapter 3It's great so far update soon XD. |
 The Three Stoogies 2008-06-30 . chapter 4A good chapter update soon. |
 DarkRavie 2008-06-30 . chapter 4Very good chapter. I can't wait to read what happens in your next one. |