Yay! The spirits! I never thought to wonder what Marley was doing during the changing process, I always thought he knew about everything and was just quietly watching the whole buissness. And he was saved! You have made me want to look at Dickens' story through multiple perspectives.

COOL! Judging by the sort of character you usually make Marley, I knew he couldn't have come up with those words by himself. I ddn't know that he would be saved if Scrooge changed. Good ideas!

Well, that was intriguing. Loved the ending, who knew Scrooge could be like that? I liked how you decribed it as visions rather than a whole bunch of flashback type things. Bravo1

Dum-dum -DAH, SUSPENCE! Yay! I wonder what will happen next. Your desription of the Underworld was suberb. It would be intersting to read your desription of someone who wasn't doomed, like one of the Crathits. Anyway, the suspense is killing me, onto the next chapter!

*insert scary music here* o spuspense yay! You should put more suspense in later chapters, as suspense is really funky, like haggi. I love the end of that one!

Scrooge was being mean to fezziwig! What? I thought he liked him! (no i'm not flaming you that was great!) Evil Scrooge and Melancholy Scrooge are always loads of fun.

sorry for taking so londg to review, I haven't been in the mood lately. Anyway...i can't belive i'm saying this... Poor.. Marley?
Thanks for making me suprised at feeling sorry for a character i have always hated. Marley and Scrooge became friends? I thought the reltionship was "strictly business' Very thought provoking and a job well done!

that was very good. witnessing your own funeral would be very wierd! I like how marley described scrooge.

Neat prologue, can't wait to read the rest!
SUSPENCE!

Good work!