It's really funny (no offence) but i simply love the idea of those dialogues

Kick ** end line!

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Fantastic. Good grasp of the characters. Just one problem... this is a one shot WHY?

P.S. Please proof read for spelling. there is nothing more annoying than finding a story you like and having to stop reading to decipher words that have been spelled wrong.

Ahh, that was adorable! I loved when Caspian said, “Not her!”. That made me aww haha. Amazing story and it's a shame that it's a oneshot but still a lovely story!

aw how cute

Great job! That was well done.

i loved it. and i love so few things about susan and caspian this was perfect.

Cute! ^_^ I loved the last part.

Wow. This was really entertaining. I suppose the only thing wrong with it is that its too short! :D Perfect. 9 1/2 over 10