this covers any comments i had the last two chapters.


first of all...this is a really cool story :)

second...omg Genma is totally honest and even feels remorse for his stupid actions.

three...magical girls? seriously magical girls?

finally...who are the other girls?

Hoping to see more soon...

So, more?

Heh. This is a pretty good revision of the original. Looking forward to see what else is changed in further chapters.

Interesting bit with Soun being able to 'power up' as well. I'm sure that however he ended up with the armor and such will be an interesting story to tell.

... I wonder if Tatewaki would be jealous?

Hoping to see the next chapter soon.

I think in the previous version of the story I never got past the first chapter, didn't really grab my interest. This time, though.. wow, very well done. It's a lot of fun, and I'm really enjoying it.

Went back and reread the original version through, and I do like the changes that have been made so far. Towards the end of the original version things were kind of losing coherency. That was fixed up a lot in the rewrite, and it seems more thought is being put into how things should progress.

Looking forward to more :)

I like this version better. as for teh chapter the way Kodachi got her powers seems more fitting to a canon situation as wellas his personality. also is good to see that Soun is not useless as his canon counterpart. looking foward to teh next update

quite interesting, it deviates quite a bit from the previous story especially in this last chapter but not in a bad way. I'm glad to see you working on this story. Sorry it toolk me so long to get to you about it. and i look forward to more.

Heh, old-line devil hunter. Glad to see she respects her elders. And POed fathers of course.

The reason for the naginata is because there exists a Tendo-ryu in naganata combat forms. The name wasn't chosen for no reason.

This is a very amusing series. The girls also seem to be slightly schitzophrenic (did I spell that right?), being completely shameless in their transformed state and not so otherwise (well, at least Akane is). How will they hold up?

By the way, marvelously funny. Keep this going.

At first i was not interested in reading this story from the blurb.. but i have to say I am glad I got over that as this story is highly amusing and definitely has potential that I look forward to seeing expanded.

Well THIS was a serious rewrite )
Can't wait to see the continuatioN!!

LOL, excellent additions, and wonderful way to bring Kodachi in earlier.

Wow, a big difference here, and really enjoyed how things went, and with the intro of Kodachi onto the team, can't wait for the inevitable personality clashes that will come next, as well as what this will mean for the next member of the team to be inducted.

^_^ Nicce

I wasn't much of a fan of this originally, but the rewrite is a good read and I enjoyed it. Good luck.