ok i used to like this fic but the whole thing with them being naked all the time in the last few chapters and how the adults are acting is really really making this fic suck!

interesting.

Woot Woot Woot 3 I love ponygirls n petplay p you should see my collection in SL lol, great fun story so far im looking forward to seeing where you take this!

with a trays of already P: with trays

at which point took P: point she took

to join the Nodoka P: join Nodoka

down on her heals briefly P: heels

ignoring both the discomfort P: ignoring the

their and gone in an instant P: there

fantasy tombs, manga, and magazines P: tomes

spread that far from school. P: so far or this far maybe?

experienced a feint mental P: faint

Nabiki whistles lewdly P: whistled

girls blush at the images P: blushed

priests and shine maidens P: shrine

strained into hoarse whisper P: into a hoarse whisper

ready to bear additional P: bare

simultaneously steeling her father's P: stealing

crashed dramatically inn P: in

black high healed shoes P: heeled

seen yet wich utterly P: which

ten levels of freaky though. P: though.
as naked the other girls were P: as naked as

Finally an update.)

I've always thought Shampoo would look good as a Ponygirl..but most stories would make her a cat girl for obvious reasons. But thigh-high hoof-boots, leather corset, blinders, bit-gag, and reigns? She would both look good and get over her arrogance. But that us just me.
I'm very glad to see this revision. I'm confused where you are going with this and am curious. I was expecting tokyo to come to accept, love, and defend their near-naked defenders, with teenagers starting to emulate their styles, but it seems like you are skipping the middleman and just blowing away everybody's modesty. That should cause some waves, and am curious how all this will affect future chapters.
Still hoping this is a Ranma harem fic! So few can get that right, with a good story and not just PwP. This story looks like it could do that.

I was just rereading this and was wondering where Kasumi's... implied scene went until I noticed the edit note. I take it that it will be important that she's a pure Light warrior later on?

Anyway, great job with this story, I look forward to more chapters. And it's eventual completion. Please don't abandon it.

Lol you're making it into one of THOSE fics I see. Well no harm done but it does make me feel that making Kasumi the first "victim" of the curse kinda 'meh' not cool. Even though anybody else would just be obvious.

LOL the omake! Hah, can't wait to see this whole nudity thing explode.

Hmmm, assuming that the wind element will be assigned to Ukyou, I wonder whose going to be the metal and dark elements! :O Well, off to read more of this fantastically entertaining fic.

Hmm, seems like the transformation somehow lessens their typical bipolar personalities, Well, off to read more, must say it's quite an interesting read!

Ahh, Ranma is so cute now _ I mean just look at him spearing food and being cuddly! The thing I'm most surprised about is how Ranma is taking everything in strides.

Pretty interesting! Wonder if there will be coupling for Ranma or not... would be pretty interesting to see how you're gonna manage to do that if you do plan to go through with a pairing. Very interesting so far.

Okay...what? Don't get me wrong, I like lemons, and kinky ones too. Pony girls, bondage, it's all good. But what happened to Kasumi makes no sense and totally comes out of nowhere. I just think you went ten miles too far having her engage in nip claps, threesomes in the street, losing her virginity to a stranger, etc.

Her powers have no safety mechanism? The organization of demon hunters are not noticing this? Ranma doesn't realize something is wrong with his charges?

This story has changed. This last chapter has lost the humor and fun the other chapters had.

This story officially fails for me. It was bad enough with the cliche 'our parents were demon hunters too' thing as well as the retarded reasoning for the nudity set up, but then you turn the characters into almost slut who are on their way to having sex with anyone, anywhere at the drop of a hat. Kasumi, Nabiki and Akane's nudity being excepted like its nothing; Kasumi letting anyone feel her up and have sex with her because they feel like it, it's just too much for me to suspend my disbelief. I started out liking the idea but it just seems to be going nowhere adding stupid would be plot points to a fic that could just as well be a dull PwP.