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Marilena 2008-06-10 . chapter 1
Hey, there. :)

I really liked this! I was in the right mood for a light-hearted fic and this was just great. ^_^

-Mari
Aranae 2008-06-09 . chapter 1
Heheh! That reminded me when my mom made me believe that if I eat any fruit seeds a tree would grow up in my stomach XD
Anyway, nice oneshot! But keep an eye on your punctuation.

Aranae
FaerieFighter009 2008-06-09 . chapter 1
Ice cweam, yeah! So adorable when they're all together. I love the last sentence XD
xSweetxYunax 2008-06-09 . chapter 1
Aww, this is so cute!

"Mommy flavor."

Terra and Elly are so adorable :)
MysticSpiritus 2008-06-09 . chapter 1
Aw, that was cute. Hopefully, the girls won't get the Stomach Monster. It's not fun!

Mystic
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