this is really good. regardless of what everyone else says, i like pansy (in a wierd way), update!

Whoa! I would be so happy if she was scrateched. Nice story by the way it was really good.

This had the potential to be way better than it was, but it was still ok.

There were a fair few grammatical errors. For example, it's usually good practice that, when one character finishes talking and another starts, to put that sentence with the second character on a new line. You failed to do this a fair few times.

Also, there were a couple of anomalies. Cam corders (useing the proper term would be better, in my opinion)and cameras of the muggle variety are unlikely to work in Hogwarts (because electricity doesn't work around there) and Hagrid is very unlikely to know what a camcorder is.

The rest of the stuff...well, it could be improved but it was ok. Maybe the storyline could be tighter? Like instead of having everyone say hi, you could use a blanket sentence for this. e.g. As Seamus, Dean and Neville entered the bedroom, they were greeted by Ron and Harry. And then proceed with the rest.

But anyway, it was ok. Good luck with your other fanfics.

Regards, Trins x

This is very interesting, please write more soon!

i love this fan fic hurry upand write the 2nd ch please ineed stuffto read

Please write chapter 2! This is one of the only good draco/pansy fanfics I've read! Please!

Oooooohhhhh! This is so cool! You have to keep writing! Ur a great author! Keep writing!

No, no, I am not reviewing my own story. I just have something to say. I LOVE this fanfic. And I support Draco/Pansy and I'm DAMN proud of it! Sexy Fleur, whatever your name is, I don't have a problem. This fic was dedicated to a friend who's new on fanfics. I wrote out all that stuff for her. Now, if you hate it, I have this to say to you. It's. My. Fanfic. I'll. Write. That. Stuff. In. The. Author's. Note. If. I. Want. To.

For those of you who are reading the story and not giving a h*** about the author's note, chapter 2 is on it's way!

The story was too pathetic to press on reading, but I have a comment on your author's note at the beginning: we KNOW that Malfoy and Draco are the 'same person.' We KNOW that, at Hogwarts, rivals often call each other by their surnames (i.e. "in the books Harry just calls him Malfoy!). We KNOW that A.N. means "Author's Note." Also...we don't care if Snape is in your fic. He is in the vast majority of them. Geez, girl! What is your problem? :(

Nice story, I look forward to the next chapter. You don't see too many Draco/Pansy stories but I like it. Even though I am a H/G shipper I like H/H also so I hope there is a lot of them also.