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| Geko 2008-10-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseSuch a cute fic! I love it, please update soon! |
| SARA 2008-09-18 ch 6, anon. | abuseupdate son and get drew to beat harly up |
| animelover1snv 2008-08-29 ch 6, | abusecan you right more its a good story i like it |
| Ada 2008-08-28 ch 6, anon. | abusePlease UPDATE! Everyone is getting impatiane(sp) You haven't update is at least 2 month. Sorry about my sister. I'm Winnie. I think you might know me because I review a few time about not updating. My sister is really impatince(sp). Hope you update soon because I'm a huge contestshipping fan like my sister. 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| Winnie 2008-08-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseI hope you update son, because it was a great story. It been a long time since you update. I think a lot of people is getting impation(sp?) |
| PerlaNemesis 2008-08-11 ch 6, | abuseI hate Harley! He is so evil! And poor Drew. If he could know that May is alive. |
| blupheonix5 2008-08-11 ch 6, | abuseHarley is SO evil. anyway, great story. keep updating. |
| Temari411 2008-08-10 ch 6, | abuseaww poor Drew. If only he knew. Anyway good chapter but a lil short. update soon! |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx 2008-08-10 ch 6, | abusepoor Drew... he thinks that she's gonne, i can't wait what he'll do when he find out she still alive, what would he do to her? poor also May for she can't escape now from the temple, can she? i hope Drew will find her soon. please update really soon. |
| Kittypride16 2008-08-10 ch 6, | abuseWow very deep chapter... I love that last paragraph... update. |
| skittleysweet 2008-08-02 ch 5, | abuseomg i loved it ah update asap |
| Jodie Maidment 2008-07-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseI love it! But how could Harley be so cruel? ((Pulls out Misty's mallet and hits Harley)) "Take that, Harley!" Anyway, I think i know who saves May. Don, Don, DA... Post next chappie soon... Bye Jodie out... |
| Storm Midnight 2008-07-24 ch 5, | abuseHoly crap! Harley you bastard! I'm guessing this is where Manaphy makes his apperance? One of my favorite chapters, I really hope you update soon! |
| Temari411 2008-07-23 ch 5, | abuseOh wow. Poor May! Harley really has gone to far. Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!~ |
| drgnaurora95 2008-07-23 ch 5, anon. | abusesuch a good chapter!! please update soon! |