:`(...*sniffles* Mari, I don't quite know what to say but that was <3...why did the first fic I read from you make me cry?

wow. the feeling you created in this piece was absolutely breath taking. How sad this was! It put tears in my eyes. great job! Really great job!

This story, your writing, the way in which you formatted it, all added to the feeling of desperation, abandonment and bleakness of this shortie.

It left me feeling both sad and strangely numb at the same time, how I imagine Yuffie must be feeling.

This is beautiful Marilena. Your style is fresh and unique. I really did feel for both Yuffie and the only mentioned Reeve. You write some wonderful angst. I hope you write more soon!

The emotion you crafted into this is incrediable. I felt as if I were reading actual letters written by some forlorned woman to her love. The realisim adds to it's depth. If I weren't so stone cold I would have surely shed a tear!

I won't leave on a lie...I did shed a tear. A small crystalline tear for both Yuffie and Reeve and you superb writing skills.

Oh wow, that was so amazingly sad!! My favorite part was where she was dancing, but looking over his shoulder at Reeve... that's so heartbreaking. gwaa >_

thats really sad but i loves it

Holy crap Mari. That was...wow. I'm tearing up. Absolutely beautiful. I'm speechless. Excellent job.

~Bones

Thank you, nario. :)

Simply speechless...I don't even have a crumpet remark to make! Take that as job VERY well done.

Oh God, darling... this is so beautiful! Brought me close to tears!

*sniffle* This was heartbreaking Mari...really it was. Still it was written beautifully. I really enjoyed it and can't wait to read more of your great work! Hopefully the next edition to your library will be happier to counter the heartache in this one

Mari...I'm crying!

This is wonderful.