Aw...what a cute story! I love what you have done with your Indy and Mutt-especially with Indy being a super-protective of Mutt. And how he calls him Pup and Puppy!

Good job! Your English is very good. You speak better English than I do! :-)

Please update soon!

Great story! Update soon!

Hey! When you update a new chappie? Come on...I want read more...update, update

Thank you for posting! I love it! Update soon! I wanna know how it continues!

ey! hace mucho q no oigo de ti! los examenes supongo...^^ no abandones la historia, por favor, q me gusta muchisimo! animo!

no, such an intence point how could you be so cruel?!?
i'm crying here! I was so into the story, and then what happened you ask? Well I respond, I was jolted out of the story of this world.

Please write more! I haven't heard from you in a while! Please continue this awesome story! I love the way you describe things. You do an absolutely excellent job! Keep it up...and hurry! (P.S. The more Mutt angst, the better!)

You must update please this is such a well written story.

NO! Why? That's it? xD Anyways, this was great and I loved this! (:

Angelica

That was good! The only thing is that in quotation marks, the punctuation is on the inside, not on the outside. (:

"Yes, you can calm him down, Indy. You see? Mutt is not crying anymore," said Marion...

Your english isn't bad, but there are some words that aren't in the correct tense. Like sometimes you wrote 'was' instead of 'were'.

PERO, si me gusto mucho. (: Ja...porque no escribi todo en espanol? Ah, este pais... ._.

Angelica

it was agood storry so far thank you

me gusta tu historia (:
esta buena
por favor, mas, mas!
sorry my spanish isnt the best. i understand it completely but i cannot spell it

By the way, I very much agree with your view of the fourth Indy movie. I wish they would have shown Indy being more gentle and loving towards Mutt. That's why I like your story so much. It gives me what the movie didn't! Thanks again so much for your story and I look forward to reading the next chapter.

I was so excited to read chapter three! Excellent work! Mutt is so cute! I love what you're doing with his and Indy's relationship. I believe and enjoy every bit of it. Please write more soon...and I have one tiny request of my own: please let Mutt live! =) Thank you for sharing your talent with me!

i love this story its so different and sweet. I think its a shame they didn't put more emphasis on the relationship too and i love indy calling mutt 'puppy'! hehe makes me laugh, very good please do more soon!

ps. The only comment i have is that your paragraphs are very long sometimes and it makes it hard to read, but its still great anyway :D