I loved this fic and especially your characterisation of Lily.

There's a lot I want to say on it but it's late and I don't think my examiners will accept 'reading of fanfiction' as an excuse for not revising. But basically I loved this fic.

this was so funny :) i loved the concept of lily being part of the mauraders in a way. great job.

I really enjoyed reading it. You did a great job!

I like it, and i really like the plot. but Lily is way too, bitchy, still. and she talks a lot about things that sometimes are too thesaurusy... but i do like it, a lot :)

Lily Luna Potter is the daughter of Harry and Ginny. That's the character your story is under. When FF added Lily L Potter, it changed most of the original James/Lily stories to James P/Lily Luna. Please change it back. Thank you!

This fic is definitely "aw~!" worthy, I loved it. It was so adorable. Lily's character came to life and I could actually imagine her acting the way she did.

I didn't really expect Lily to be friends with Sirius and James. But I think that your interpretation of Sirius and Remus was really interesting and their personalities meshed really well with Lily's so it made the fic seem realistic.

Anyway, I don't really know what I'm saying anymore, so I'll just stop now. :P

Great fic! :]

Aw, this was a cute story. It was well written and very engaging. I really think you should add an epilouge that shows Sirius' and Remus' reactions. That would be amusing to read!

Aw, what a sweet ending. :)
You've done a good job on this story!

jessicats
xoxo

*silence*

..Wait.. It's over?
No!
I loved it, I loved it, I loved it (I still love it).

I love it! You have to update soon!

your back! :D
i am so freakin happy you cant believe it
i have been waiting for this story to be updated since
you last updated...:|
anywayz glad you re-wrote it
update soon :)

Like it a lot! I hope you'll update soon! Keep up the good work!

You totally have to update soon! CLIFFHANGER!

Hey! Aww, wciked! Shefinally admitted it! You had BETTER make him like her back ;) lol.



Tracy.

Poor poor Lily, I'm really sorry for her, men suck!
The chap was brilliant, I really liked, actually, I loke your whole ff. It's fun, you've got great humour.

Continue soon, I don't really like cliffhanger
Amy