KUDOS! AND...PLEASE UPDATE? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WITH CHERRY (OR WHATEVER YOU LIKE) ON TOP! THANKS!

This story is really different than most L/J fics. I hope you finish it soon. you left us with a big cliffhanger. i have read most of your stories and I really enjoy your writing. Keep up the great work! Update soon.

this fic made my day. seriously it did. and i love it! i can't wait for the next update! =D

YAY!

UPDATE!

(sorry for the review delay!! Was on hols! :D )

& You used my favourite word in this chapter! :D

I am so glad she finally did it.
But I imagine James has not taken in what she has said!!
He seems quite thick when it comes to Lily!!

Anyhow, big thanks for this. Loved it as ever.
Cheers.
X

excellent
i cant wait to read the rest of the chapter
cant wait to see what happens with james' response :D to what lily just stated to him :D

I'm so glad you updated! I'm sorry you don't like this story anymore, it's a shame cause it was really funny! Exceprt for this chapter who looked very sad. Thank you for finishing this story even if you're not up to it! I'll read it till the end so even if it's only for me (and I'm sure it won't), thank you very much!

I'm glad that you are planning to finish it. I'm happy to read that Lily finally told James how she felt...can't wait to read about his reaction.

Wha--what? You leave me with THAT?! A huge (Huge!) cliffy! Gahh! Haha. I really really like this. Please update when you have the chance. xD

Please don't leave it there!
I really like this story so update soon!! :D

hmm... forcing yourself to finish this? that's not good. anyways, i think you're rushing the plot a bit. it was like all the beginning chapters were leading up to something big and you just end it with a spark instead of a bang. maybe it's because of the forcing yourself to finish this? i probably completely wrong though so yeah. Anyways, i liked this chapter, and can't wait to read the next one. :)

Ha-Ha! I must read more!

oh, the joys of irony.
:)
update soon,
Hannah

I love how you just cannot reason when you fall for someone hard.
You communicated that very nicely with this chapter.
God knows why she loves him, yet love him she does...

Love their banter!! Cheers! (As always, very enjoyable!!)
X

aww!! such a short chapter!!

you always have an excuse concerning various chapters crappy-ness, don't you? you lead an easy life, my friend. i have math homework, and don't blame the fact that i haven't even started it on you fic...nope...no sir (it was some other fics as well:D)

i don't think you want me going : O-M-Gee, so totally loved this one, can't wait for the next chapter, because the whole point is to show you don't like cliche's, right? ;) If not, then read that ridiculous line there until your ego is the size of NY...

toddles!